Hansel and Gretel
This week we were learning about the fantastic and how we can put it in our writing. Here is a photo of the fantastic and one paragraph of my writing.
The forest was menacing and murk as chills were spiders crawling along their backs. The forest was like a monster as red gloomy eyes were everywhere looking at them. The sour scent sailed across the room over powering the sweet aroma of the cotton candy. Smacking Hansel and Gretel right in the face. They paused. They paused wordlessly. They paused, wordlessly until the smell led them deeper into the dark forest. They both were led following the smell as if they were hypnotised walking like a zombie.
What is your favourite fairy tail storey?
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