Speech writing
This week for Writing we have been working on your speech. My speech is about well being and what it means. Here is my first paragraph.
New Zealand has one of the highest domestic violence rates. On average, 13 New Zealand women are killed by their partners each year; in 2017, there were more than 120,000 police call outs for family violence, 328 each day; one every four minutes.
These facts are not exactly correct because a lot of Domestic violence meaning violence in your own home are not reported to the police. Why is this. Also New Zealand is one of the world leaders in obesity. In 2018/19 around 1 in 3 adults (aged 15 years and over) were obese (30.9%) also around 1 in 9 children (aged 2–14 years) were obese (11.3%) Why is this, we live in one of the most beautifulest country's in the world yet we lead in Domestic violence and obesity.
What do think about New Zealand leading in Domestic violence and obesity.
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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