Goldilocks the Thief
This week in writing we finished our Goldilocks articles. We will be looked specifically at our paragraph structure. Our goal was write in structured, well developed paragraphs that flow well from one to the next within the text.
Here is the first paragraph which has a pun and a image.
Goldilocks acts like she has done nothing. Goldilocks isn't as gold as you think. At the dawn of the morning as The three bears went for a walk so their porridge would cool. Goldilocks started her spread of crimes during this moment.
What pun would you have at the start?
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