Basketball poem
This week we were tasked to write a poem it could have been Haiku, Rhymed poetry, Riddle Poem and shape poem. I choose Rhymed poetry. I wrote about basketball as it is something I can relate to. Here is my work.
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Tūmeke tino pai Max! I really like the way you wrote a poem about a personal interest. I can tell from your writing that you are passionate about basketball. Maybe next time you could try and write the title of your poem using a poetic device.
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