This week it is poem week for writing. On Monday we were assigned to find a poem of kenn Nesibtitt poems then use the poetry toolbox to find any special features. Then on Wednesday we had to make a poem (your choose what type) about what ever you want. I chose to make my poem about my dog, jax. Here it is.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 7, 2020
Poem about my dog jax
This week it is poem week for writing. On Monday we were assigned to find a poem of kenn Nesibtitt poems then use the poetry toolbox to find any special features. Then on Wednesday we had to make a poem (your choose what type) about what ever you want. I chose to make my poem about my dog, jax. Here it is.
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Hi Max
ReplyDeleteWow what a great poem. You have obviously put a lot of time and effort in to your work. Anything to do with dogs always catches my eye. They are fantastic companions and as they say "mans best friend"
Steve
hi Max, that was a really good story about your dog "Jax" there was some really good rhymes in there. what type of dog is it? great writing.
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